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Toasted Jelly, June 24th, 2008, 10:30 am


Guys.. Truffles.. he/she/it's gonna have a gender owo;; So... he/she/it's only genderless till I settle down on one...

besides that...
I.. I'm loving all of your comments... really I am.. They fill me with great joy ;w; <3<3 SO thank you for taking the time to comment! <3

ALSO. I'm going to TRY and update on Tuesdays... TRY. -I go to my dad's in Chicago in the summer and I don't have photoshop or anything there, so, I can still draw pages... but scanning and turning them blue, however, is another story.

Okay, done rambling my life story~ <3<3




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User Comments:
Kitsune of the Sun, June 24th, 2008, 10:41 am


Truffles expression in the last panel made me giggle and the Old creeper part did too! xD

Don't rush your self on pages. ^^


D: (Guest), June 24th, 2008, 10:41 am


first comment. x3
I STILL THINK TRUFFLES SHOULD BE A BOI. >:


;~; (Guest), June 24th, 2008, 10:42 am


...nevermind, not first comment. D;


Striped Orange Socks, June 24th, 2008, 10:51 am


GENDERLESS LOL

CREPPERRRR
that's awesome.


Nova (Guest), June 24th, 2008, 10:53 am


boy boy boy! Truffles is a boy xD


Cup_Cake, June 24th, 2008, 10:57 am


i wonder does he wish it was some creeper beside him now and not a cat who he thinks is going to eat him XD haha


Toasted Jelly, June 24th, 2008, 11:03 am


Kitsune of the Sun~ Glad you liked those parts, I did too! - I couldn't stop laughing while drawing them XDD;;- Oh, but I think a week for one page is plenty, especially for the summer time! Plus, I just wanna get rollin'! >w< <3

Guest D:~ I value your input and opinion on the matter. WE SHALL SEE, what I decide on... -indecisive- @3@;;

Striped Orange socks~ I really wish I had some striped orange socks ;A; <3 But uhm, CREEPER. SO WRINKLY. -dies- ;DD <3<3

Nova~ Was a boy, now he/she/its some poor gender confused animu stuck in limbo because of my indecisiveness ;w;

Cup Cake~ I think he/she/it does. DDD:


ice-alchemist-03, June 24th, 2008, 11:07 am


Truffles made me lol. he/she/it (taht was fun to type!) is soooo cute! can't wait 'till next page! =^.^=


Isu, June 24th, 2008, 11:08 am


XDDDD OLD DECREPIT MOUSE FTW <333


Toasted Jelly, June 24th, 2008, 11:34 am


Ice-alchemist-03~ He/she/it is sorta amusing XDD;; <3 HOPEFULLY YOU WON'T WAIT FOREVER.
-determined-
Isu~ He just wants some love! :DDDD
-shot-


[/Max] <3, June 24th, 2008, 11:43 am


"LMFAO! In that little @#$%! bubble, is that a cactus I see?..."
xDD


Vosailyn, June 24th, 2008, 11:44 am


Lol xDDD He/She/it is so cuuuute!!
It's a CAT D8 Ruuun!!


Toasted Jelly, June 24th, 2008, 11:45 am


[/Max] <3~ I always throw Cacti in those little swear symbol bubbles... >w> <3

Vosailyn~ YES. He/She/It needs to skidaddle! <3<3


Top Hat Girl, June 24th, 2008, 11:50 am


Love the last two panels! XDDD

The new banner is awesome! :DDD


Top Hat Girl, June 24th, 2008, 11:57 am


Look what I found, yo! If you're gonna make this hetero (or straight) you might wanna change it.

UnNatural Order description:
"Noah the Cat was just out taking a stroll through the lovely winter weather, when BAM!!! destiny strikes and he takes in a homeless mouse he found in the snow. Much against the wishes of his mother and the mouse, he keeps the mouse -like a pet- providing
HIM
a safe -or not- place to live, food and a roof over
HIS
head. While Noah seems to be doing this out of the goodness of his heart, is there something else compelling him to behave so unnaturally?"

AGH! I was thinking about how you said you were gonna change this to hetero and these popped up when I read them. GAWD I'm such a loser~


Denarodi, June 24th, 2008, 12:29 pm


I love this page! Their hair is just...lovely! And their ears and Truffles' expressions!


Toasted Jelly, June 24th, 2008, 12:32 pm


Top hat girl~ HOLY MOLY. NEVER. EVEN. CROSSED MY MIND. THAT'S SO MUCH! I'll have to remember that! @w@;;; And thanks, I wanted something cute.. -was tired of the old banner- XDD;;

Oni-bu~ His hair is my favorite hair... ever... to shade.. it really is =w= <3<3 >w<

~~~~~~~~~~~~
I always respond to comments and someone makes a comment while I do so XDD;;
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Denarodi~ Thanks! This page was a fun one ^w^ <3<3


Panther385, June 24th, 2008, 12:42 pm


HAY JELLEH
Be on MSN tonight, I have an idea for this whole he-vs-she gender confusion thing with Truffles. >O


Toasted Jelly, June 24th, 2008, 12:57 pm


KAAAAY! I'll try! But I'm going to my dad's house... and I haven't seen him in two months.. so If I miss it.. I'm sorree! But I'LL TRY MIGHTY HARD!


princessemiko, June 24th, 2008, 1:22 pm


does he think he's dessert,..... or some kind of treat...?.....

well he IS super cute.... so i guess he is sort of a visual treat.......


Little Puppy, June 24th, 2008, 3:03 pm


Lol, I love how you did the hair


Hanaki, June 24th, 2008, 4:07 pm


the cat has nice hair ^^


Berry Philiac, June 24th, 2008, 4:14 pm


What.

Skawwww <3


Qwchestr, June 24th, 2008, 4:33 pm


I love the way you draw everything! <333
The eyes, the ears, and the HAIR!! IT'S BEAUTIFUL~ <333

And Truffles is so cute freaking out~ XDD


Mystical Dreams, June 24th, 2008, 5:03 pm

Aww
Love the comic so far and it's sooo cuuuute! I do wish you would keep truffles as a boy Pweeaaasssee *Puppy eyes*


Kaida (Guest), June 24th, 2008, 5:15 pm


OMG, its so detailed! And adorable!
(I vote the mousy be a boy :3)


[Dei], June 24th, 2008, 6:21 pm


>wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww<
<3

Stop drawing so gorgeously!
I could cry from joy
<3


amiko_16, June 24th, 2008, 6:29 pm


But Truffles, lookit how cute he is first XDD lol


animefreak0701 (Guest), June 24th, 2008, 6:34 pm


Girl or boy, Truffles has some sexy hair. =w= <3 <3 <3
And Noah too. Dear lord. D: <3333
I'mma... oggle them for a while. >3>;;

Omfg, the creeper makes me snort in laughter. D:! xDD


Pisceancrazy, June 24th, 2008, 6:49 pm


love the geezer part it made me lol big time...and the how Truffles is all like oh, cat ears...all calm like then freaks the friz out! lol I heart this all <3


MyaKonekko, June 24th, 2008, 7:45 pm


Truffles would look good as a girl. I just realized that now. *v* I love his expression in panel 5.


fgirlmaggie, June 24th, 2008, 7:54 pm


i love your art so much. you're sooo good. i love the hair and hands and (lol) the ears.

i thikn Truffles would make a good girl OwO i think you think that subconsciencely while making pages because he/she/it looks more like agirl every time i see him/her/it :P maybe that's just my thoughts affecting how i see it though....

BAHH WHO NEEDS BLUE PAGES? as long as they're scanned i thikn we'll be good. of course....i love the blue effect....it's different :)


Skeptico, June 24th, 2008, 8:51 pm


Haha, Truffles still seems rather on the male side to me =D No matter what it ends up being, I'll still love it so totally hardcore.

I love this page, it's so pretty! Your artwork keeps improving and expanding in leaps and bounds.

Truffles' ears? = THE CUTEST THINGS IN //THE WORLD.//


stripes, June 24th, 2008, 9:06 pm


If you don't keep HIM a HE, I will be SAD.


jiaLLY, June 24th, 2008, 9:47 pm


ASDFGHJKLZXCVBNQWEETIPTOU...!!

THE SHADING. I love the shading so much. HAIIRRRR. How can hair be so pretty. /drools

T-Truffles is so pretty. I love your art so much. <3


uhh...guest? (Guest), June 24th, 2008, 9:53 pm

genderless...ness
i think that it would make more sense if truffles was a boy sense it's unnatural order and boyxboy is more "unnatural" but you should do whatever you want, i'll still read it either way! good job by the way.


Guest, June 24th, 2008, 10:32 pm


Hmm...word of caution.

Personally, I feel that truffles turning female would give way to make this story either slightly feminist or extremely sexist, and I'd have to warn you against the latter. You've stated already that Noah takes truffles in and begins treating him as a 'pet.' If you make Truffles a woman and put her into that situation, then--be warned--that opens quite a can of worms. Suddenly your story would feature a woman who is essentially being held prisoner by her love interest. If you want to say, then, that she wouldn't be a prisoner per se--just a resident of the house, let me point out that she is then almost entirely dependant on her 'caretaker'.

I guess what I'm trying to say is this: A situation like the one above may cause you to have to rethink where your story is going.


Cammy-chan (Guest), June 24th, 2008, 10:35 pm


*stares in awe of your work* wow....Amazing! I can't wait to see what happens next! -^w^-
I love it


SirDerangedReindeer, June 25th, 2008, 8:07 am


I love the old mouse. Harhar.

I don't mind if Truffles is a boy or girl, he/she's, your character in your comic. ;D


No Name (Guest), June 25th, 2008, 12:59 pm


Your comic is so adorable and amazing X3

..I think it would be cool if Truffles were a boy, but I'd love the comic either way ^^


Muffin, June 25th, 2008, 2:35 pm


This page looks very good. I think your style has improved a lot a lot!

On the note of Truffles being genderless, pwease make him a boy? I will be very sad if he's not. ;A;


Jesse (Guest), June 26th, 2008, 4:53 pm


Personally, I like Truffles as a boy...but I'm gay so I might be slightly biased ^^;;


V-chan, June 27th, 2008, 3:52 pm


Ok, here is what I think. Until you fix your gender problem(which isn't really a problem in my head because either truffles is a boy or girl(girl sounds cuter X3) story is so cute to abondon :3), you could just excuse their youth for the gender problem XD I'm not sure what age you set for them but they look young, like around 12-14.... Even if truffles is a girl maybe she's growing... slow? <.< or if it's a boy it's ok even... of sorts? so even if truffles is a girl then her body won't grow much feminine for a while and everyone will be happy?? z.z I have no idea about it's personality so I'm not sure whatever I say will occur with the story, maybe truff could be a tomboy(if it's a girl) or a girly boy (if it's a boy)..... and now I really feel like I'm repeating your theories x__X;;;;;
Oh, also you could leave it genderless or perhaps it's a mystery to every character so when you finally decide truff's gender you can make the cute thing announce it =P Leaving it genderless would be such a pain and sad D:
I guess I'm begining to sound bossy and I have no right for that ^^;

But whatever you do, Unnatural order is a cute one and both way it's cute, I don't mind XD


kirbyeverest, June 27th, 2008, 8:37 pm

VOTE GUY!
SO much cuter!!!!


Tayday12, June 28th, 2008, 4:44 pm

THIS PAGE IS RAD.
ESPECCIALLY THE FOURTH PANEL.
IT. IS. THE. SHIT D>!


hiddenwings, June 28th, 2008, 11:12 pm


truffles should be a girl!!!!!!!


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